Episode 109: The Gigue is Up

If your story had a sound, Slushies. What would it be? A rush, a zuzz, a sizzle? David Landon’s “Bach, Onomatopoeia, and the Wreck” triggers a discussion of stories and sounds, and poems that resist narrative closure. Shane Chergosky’s “Headwind” takes us down a different path. Erasures, Slushies. Ammi right? Listen to us puzzle over the way erasures “make it new” and simultaneously obliterate and conjure the from which they’re made. Special note: Jason reads the erasure twice. First as a robot, then as a human. We love both versions-- of the poem, and Jason. And if you are hungry for more: take this and this and this.

 

At the table: Marion Wrenn, Alex Tunney, Kathleen Volk Miller, Jason Schneiderman, Samantha Neugebauer, Larissa Morgano

 

This episode is brought to you by one of our sponsors, Wilbur Records, who kindly introduced us to the artist A.M.Mills, whose song “Spaghetti with Loretta” now opens our show. 

 

 

David is never quite sure whether he is an actor who writes poetry or a poet who acts. And perhaps he can be forgiven his obsession with iambic pentameter: he has done a lifetime of Shakespeare, as an actor (New York, Nashville, and Alabama Festivals), director, and coach. His poetry—all iambic pentameter—has been published in Able Muse (Write Prize, winner), Georgia Review (Williams Prize, featured finalist), Southwest Review (Marr Prize, runner-up), the Dark House, Think Journal, and elsewhere. Officially, he is the Bishop Frank A. Juhan Professor of Theatre Emeritus at Sewanee, the University of the South.

 

 

Bach, Onomatopoeia, and the Wreck

 

For all we knew, it was a random chunk

of interstellar rock, the rear-end crash

that brought us to a halt. Dinner was out,

of course, and the Bach too, I realized,

feeling it in my neck, and standing there

in the rain, examining my totaled car,

the guilty driver soaked, in tears. The cops

were nice enough, did what they had to do

efficiently. The wrecker did show up,

eventually, and we began to cope.

And since it’s now collision story time,

the word I’m hearing in my head is ‘thud’.

 

There’s ‘clunk’, of course, or ‘jolt’, ‘wham-bang’, or ‘thwack’.

‘Thwack’ has that sudden, can’t-be-happening feel,

as in, “I was just sitting, reading Kant,

when suddenly, inside my head, I felt

this ‘thwack’, and everything went blank.” But no!

The word that truly bongs the knell is ‘thud’,

essence—onomatopoetically—

of impact, ‘thud’, from dice, to hand-grenade,

to asteroid. We need the stupid ‘d’

of ‘doo-doo’, ‘dodo’, ’dude’, or ‘dud’, or ‘dead’.

‘You’re-done-for-d’ is what we’re up against;

you never know when out of nowhere, ‘thud’!

 

But on the other hand, there’s Bach: the Bach

we missed, the works for cello solo. Bach:

initial ‘b’, a kind of plosive bump,

terminal ‘ch’, a bit of friction in

the throat, but in between the ‘b’ and ‘ch’,

the ‘ah’, release: sustained and open, ‘ah’.

Think of the bow colliding with the string,

a subtle thud, a scrape, and out floats Bach,

genial Bach-analia of dark

and light, a theory of the universe

as music: bang, and then the sarabande,

the minuet, the allemande, the gigue.

 

 

Shane Chergosky was born in Minnesota where he was raised on stuffed cabbage and heavy metal. His work has appeared in Pithead Chapel, HASH Journal, Juke Joint, and is forthcoming in Adirondack Review. He holds an MFA from George Mason University and lives in Washington, D.C.

 

 

Headwind

 

? When I think about the story she told me

about that I don’t even wanna hurt the guy. I don’t

know if I could meet that person and act normal.

I remember I did that when I was about 20,21.

I didn’t go into CVS with Xunaxi to

What a bastard I was . And      

 

 

 

//

 

 

ith what courses I take.Luckily I can only take two (!!!). Maybe a lit course

and…an elective? It’d be SO cool to do screen-

writing. Finally would have a chance to write that

SciFi…I ordered “The Art of Syntax” after Phebe

brought it over. I honestly get so self-conscious talking

with her about sentence-level stuff. She’s so smart and

her recall is so good (regardless of what she says re: her        

 

 

 

//

 

 

I want to sleep in a crappy hotel and make

jokes hold her after we kill a pint of ice cream.

something feels right about her, about the way I feel  

 

around her. I want her attention. I want her to

pay attention to me. She does! but I don’t know it’s

different when you’re with what I have a

hard time with imagining her with her ex, though they’re      

 

 

 

//

 

 

I feel like fragments could be a part of

my work/thesis. It’d be cool to take a finished

poem of mine, print copies, and do some Christian

Hawkey-type process with it/them. The 19^th and 20^th

days had that feel to them because I tore a bit

from the top of the page, forcing me to write around

the tear. Now, if I had a finished poem, and shot

it with a gun, or let an animal chew on I, or

let a human chew on it even, the parts that survive      

 

 

 

//arrative time no time

 

 

 

feeling of the trout throat closing odd breathing

but accepting that I have limits I deserve to feel

OK, to take a break I’m OK I’m doing everything      

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

I’m afraid of telling her how strong my feelings are

I think it wise to simply show her and not ask about

sex for a few more months.

She said we’re dating and that makes me feel

secure.      

 

 

 

//

 

 

Canal 

a cane smoothed

orchard

backlogged

beggar concrete

daisy a                   conquest    

 

 

 

//

 

 

not together I guess I’m having a hard time NOT

imagining them together. How could he treat her

that way? I mean no relationship is a cakewalk

but like how could someone tell a woman they’ve

been with for over a year that they’d rather

keep driving and make it (home?) on time than

stop for a tampon, to let the woman you supposedly

love (did he even tell her?) that you’d rather her sit

in her own blood, in discomfort and shame than

do everything in your power to relieve her? to actually

act? to perform an act of humanity? of care?

concern    

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

subcultural history. I feel like (and I’m probs

stating the obvious) thagt the niches of already niche

are erased by the dominant cultural narrative/  

 

the narrative(s) that are hoisted up by capitalist/

supremacist ideals and/or organizations. I can’t 

write organization without thinking about grant writing      

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

I can, I’m doing a lot. Teaching is a lot. I’m 

going to apply for the fellowship. It’s not that I

don’t want to teach, I just want time to

focus on my work. I keep feeling its really getting

somewhere. A chapbook at the least and a

publishable one too! I want it. This semester is

just wearing

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

Where only a portion of the whole survives. Then,

I could make the other parts appear elsewhere?

Maybe it’s too on the nose but I’ve been thinking

about the fragmented texts of the Anglo-Saxons

(and probs other traditions) in association

with incomplete narratives    

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

raging satin page paginate vagina labia vulva

intestinal contested protest regress transgress

shake Shakespeare a knight made of feathers

stuffed w/ feathers feathers on the doorstep

rich lumber in heaps full pools of yellow

beer getting warm in the kitchen

the glow of the microwave the suran wrap

melting on the still-cold lasagna, the color

of waiting. Not even a color. Page page again

wait know confound botch rip slap chirp

girder serve elastic teeth cold    

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

I’m so glad I’m not that way. Maybe I

am and don’t know it until it happens?

Maybe thinking about

Phebe’s ex reminds me

of that, that’s why it

makes me so disgusted

and maybe it’s good

that I’m disgusted  

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

to do. But you live and learn. I

want to love again and make it right, or do it

effectively, the way that makes us both feel whole or

more whole/full than empty. I will get an A in

grant writing. I will succeed. I know I’ll get an

extension and be able to make the internship    

 

 

   

//

 

 

 

I want to

make love to her real bad she d r ive s me crazy.

She’s sensual , and erotic, and really    

 

 

It was a terrible, immature thing

 

 

 

//

 

 

 

Intelligent ran runaways kept barking on. A sub miss ion

hold putting entire cities into head

-shirt void a void you can buy a void that becomes

armor, a subculture, an agreed upon set of

val u es in t elligent lights through a crispy gauze

of hair swollen blue halo widening behind them

like a wedding band. Overblown evening leather

charms hanging on the door handle, on the bedpost.

Literally                      thieves war paint corpse paint

a mouth like a root system      spreading, fragmenting

branching diverging at both ends a worry

squirrely ratchet odor smolder controller

recover withdraw sheath hearth bust bent

bruised lashed fixate lack lax creation Bonneville

cruiser a loose ruining